Gothic Ghostly Castle RP

I'm still working on the opening post--like saying how the place is. So, take your time and all. But what do you think of this poem?

<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Mind your feet, heed your mind, [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]A path less traveled taken. [/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Off you go, oft to stumble, [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Wandering, weary—vacant. [/i][/align]
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[/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Pass beyond the moaning door, [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Beyond the aching leer. [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Stay while, rest your feet, [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Enjoy the quaking queer. [/i][/align]
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[/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Music we have much of, [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Witches and warlocks. [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Spirits like to sing, [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]As goblins boil-toil pots. [/i][/align]
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[/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Misty hands will prod-molest, [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Will poke and grip or grab [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Plasma-white to ever strike, [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]New life to trod the lab. [/i][/align]
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[/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]We are never ever short for guests, [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Nor the roaring plays and clamor. [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]Just mind your feet, heed you mind, [/i][/align]<div style="text-align:center;]<i style="font-size:10pt;]While wandering-weary Lavenza Manor. [/i][/align][/i]<div style="text-align:right;]
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