His index and thumb curled around the latest glass of whiskey, the other fingers resting naturally along the side. He exhaled in the manner of a man being worn down through repeated hounding. Hers was the good kind. Playful, teasing, flirtatious. He could have sworn she had essentially asked for his number twice in the same night without explicitly asking for it.
He at her once slowly and deliberately as he nursed the drink in his hand. The fingers of his free hand drew the napkin towards him and tilted it this way and that before he captiously set the drink on it. He seemed to be calculating something. Specifically he was calculating the risk of being a complete cliche if he gave his phone number out to some hot young bartender. Careful considerations were made as to whether Julianna was being polite to one of her best paying regular customers or bordering on the sincere.
He only hummed thoughtfully and remained contemplative long enough that Julianna moved away to serve other customers. While she was completing their transactions he reached into the breast pocket of his suit vest and drew out a small leather case with two fingers. He snapped it open to peer at his own stately business card inside. He considered leaving it on the bar with cash and ditching. He didn't know if he would be able to bear returning to the establishment if he did such a thing. As soon as he saw her turn back towards him he snapped the case shut and returned it to his pocket.
The sound of his name which he had requested that she use drew a half smile. He finished off the last of the whisky she'd poured and set the drink back on the bar. Knowing it was closing time, he reached for his billfold and started peeling off bills in denominations of twenty. He paused and glanced up at her. She was doing her best to discretely tell him she felt he wasn't safe to drive.
"I'm fine. Thank you for your concern." He said believing this would be enough to conclude the issue. "Work on your -" he was saying as he stood up. The room spun but he took care to attempt to conceal his state, pressing his index and middle to his temple as if words had escaped him. "-trivia. For next time."
He laid his hand on the bar depositing several bills for her and patted them lightly indicating he needed no change. He turned to scoop up his electronics which had been forgotten next to him for the majority of his time there.
He at her once slowly and deliberately as he nursed the drink in his hand. The fingers of his free hand drew the napkin towards him and tilted it this way and that before he captiously set the drink on it. He seemed to be calculating something. Specifically he was calculating the risk of being a complete cliche if he gave his phone number out to some hot young bartender. Careful considerations were made as to whether Julianna was being polite to one of her best paying regular customers or bordering on the sincere.
He only hummed thoughtfully and remained contemplative long enough that Julianna moved away to serve other customers. While she was completing their transactions he reached into the breast pocket of his suit vest and drew out a small leather case with two fingers. He snapped it open to peer at his own stately business card inside. He considered leaving it on the bar with cash and ditching. He didn't know if he would be able to bear returning to the establishment if he did such a thing. As soon as he saw her turn back towards him he snapped the case shut and returned it to his pocket.
The sound of his name which he had requested that she use drew a half smile. He finished off the last of the whisky she'd poured and set the drink back on the bar. Knowing it was closing time, he reached for his billfold and started peeling off bills in denominations of twenty. He paused and glanced up at her. She was doing her best to discretely tell him she felt he wasn't safe to drive.
"I'm fine. Thank you for your concern." He said believing this would be enough to conclude the issue. "Work on your -" he was saying as he stood up. The room spun but he took care to attempt to conceal his state, pressing his index and middle to his temple as if words had escaped him. "-trivia. For next time."
He laid his hand on the bar depositing several bills for her and patted them lightly indicating he needed no change. He turned to scoop up his electronics which had been forgotten next to him for the majority of his time there.
Bitch, I'm limited edition.
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